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lizzybennetI have a shameful secret to admit.
My professors often make this remark on my essays: "You're using passive voice". Passive voice. I get dinged for it all the time.
I assumed that it meant I was too wishy-washy in my statements. Too "passive". For example, instead of saying "I think sometimes he probably...." I should say more firmly "I know that he..." So, that's what I started doing. Making bold, firm statements.
Still getting passive voice comments on my paper.
I finally googled "Passive voice".
Oh....I've had it all wrong. No wonder! This is something I can easily fix. I feel extremely silly for not having realized this much, much sooner. What will my dad say! (btw, Chris thought this whole turn of events was hilarious and has been making passive voice jokes all weekend. We're a couple of dorks, lol)
In other news, there really isn't any other news. Life has been plodding along pretty uneventfully.
I finished reading "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?" We rented and watched "Blade Runner" last night, too. I really enjoyed the book. The movie, not so much. It always amazes me when a book is so slaughtered in movie form. Why? It seems so senseless.
Harry Potter fans, check this out. I'l be anxious to hear what you think! Personally, I'm pretty surprised. I personally never speculated about Dumbledore's sexuality.
My professors often make this remark on my essays: "You're using passive voice". Passive voice. I get dinged for it all the time.
I assumed that it meant I was too wishy-washy in my statements. Too "passive". For example, instead of saying "I think sometimes he probably...." I should say more firmly "I know that he..." So, that's what I started doing. Making bold, firm statements.
Still getting passive voice comments on my paper.
I finally googled "Passive voice".
Oh....I've had it all wrong. No wonder! This is something I can easily fix. I feel extremely silly for not having realized this much, much sooner. What will my dad say! (btw, Chris thought this whole turn of events was hilarious and has been making passive voice jokes all weekend. We're a couple of dorks, lol)
In other news, there really isn't any other news. Life has been plodding along pretty uneventfully.
I finished reading "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?" We rented and watched "Blade Runner" last night, too. I really enjoyed the book. The movie, not so much. It always amazes me when a book is so slaughtered in movie form. Why? It seems so senseless.
Harry Potter fans, check this out. I'l be anxious to hear what you think! Personally, I'm pretty surprised. I personally never speculated about Dumbledore's sexuality.
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Date: 2007-10-22 05:42 pm (UTC)Well, since I spent 75% of my college career eradicating passive voice (English degree), feel free to throw anything my way that you'd like decimated... er... PROOFREAD to get rid of that pesky problem.
When you write just think that what you're writing needs to be "doing", and not things that have been "done", hence passive voice, showing particulars in the past.
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Date: 2007-10-22 05:43 pm (UTC)I have actually DONE this... only a select few people truly appreciate comedy genius like that. ;-)
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Date: 2007-10-23 05:07 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-10-23 05:07 am (UTC)